Minggu, 05 April 2009

JOE


In the middle crowded town
The night is so quiet
And you look so down
As if life seems tired

When you sat over see
The wind blows slowly
But your mind is like wave in the sea
That is confused and messy

Joe,,,you are like a prisoner



The explanation: 
 The writer wants to compare Joe as prisoner whose life has no meaning. in the middle of town, Joe feels so confused what to do where he expects to do something but he has no power. He feels down and tired with his life that is full with problem. He thinks himself by looking at his around but it makes him sadder. 
 “but your mind is like wave in the sea” means that his mind so confused, he just do what glance in his mind as if he is lonely in width of life. his life goes no purpose.








MY DREAM

My dream is a struggle
Go forward
Step by step

My dream is a struggle
Step on surely
Spending much time and sacrifice

My dream is a struggle
Where sorrow, fear, and confusion I got


The explanation: 
 The writer tried to compare his dream is like a struggle. the writer steps on everything by plan of course. Because of the dream, the writer has spent much time for his life and sometimes got sorrow, fear and confusion. The writer believes that to catch our dream needs sacrifice, that is why he said, “My dream is a struggle”.









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